That is an incredible haiku, tchaliz! Man, you are always so good at those. I'm almost inspired to continue the haiku threads on Synergy :)
I liked your other short poem, too. I can't wait to see more of your stuff. You'll have to let me know when you post as I don't go to the Poetry forum that much. I'm really looking foward to reading your stuff.
glad you like it Marie, they are better when you don't think - you know that - actually i did not wrote any one except to answer yours in many months, so feel free to keep writing!
I'm a Jersey Girl without the accent, and the attitude pops up every once in a while. Writing makes a static object interesting, and if I write about it well enough others could find it interesting, too.
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morning shadows
and a sleepless night
on my face
i don't sleep that much these days, since idare not, dream of her, i wake up, and it's stll dark night, then i dream of you, but awake only,
T
hi Maria,
That is an incredible haiku, tchaliz! Man, you are always so good at those. I'm almost inspired to continue the haiku threads on Synergy :)
I liked your other short poem, too. I can't wait to see more of your stuff. You'll have to let me know when you post as I don't go to the Poetry forum that much. I'm really looking foward to reading your stuff.
glad you like it Marie, they are better when you don't think - you know that - actually i did not wrote any one except to answer yours in many months, so feel free to keep writing!
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