Friday, March 9, 2007

Poem Draft - 030907

I rode the train from Ann Arbor to Chicago
excited for my look at a midwestern Autumn in motion.
The colors, without the lines of train tracks,
and dead leafless weeds,
dead broken branches, and discarded tires
knit a kaleidescope blanket through my pen.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

they became so slim
the shadows across my face
the autumn wind blows

Bibliobella said...

shadows of a passing train
permanence on schedule